the files for you to write about are under the links here
just email back the answers you write with the heading above your writing ( see below) they do not have to be long explanations and you can bullet point them eg.clients comments
not too sure about heading. Logo looks good but needs some tweeking.
mindscape too big, toys for the mind and eye too small- not clear enough.
Try doing the layout with the images and less text so the visual effect is clearer.
background change because of packaging, not warm enough
logo has good font
tone down the lumunisty of the circles in the logo.
the size and placement of the pictures is good
logo concept 2 ( actually development of concept 1)
logo concept 5 ( actually development of concept 3)
website concept 1 ( allready done, so don't worry about this one)
website final design ( I will post this up as soon as possible, later on tonight)
please email me if any problems
